Yep, pretty good analysis. I agree with you on most of it. The program itself isn't very enjoyable to watch.
Still, I do think that this girl's skills were good. She's slow but I don't think she has to be. It'll be interesting to see if she has potential for more.
The girl you linked definitely has very beautiful skating and speed. It certainly is a more enjoyable performance to watch at this moment.
But hm, Polina Borovskih(sp?) in addition to technically losing to the girl I linked 2 weeks ago(the girl I linked was skating above her age group), she also lost to another 2011 born girl in that same tournament. Interesting, I'll give her a look as well.
I also can advice you to check sometimes this blog. There are a lot of gem-girls. I'm still angry how he could give A+ only to Tarakanova, and just A to Scherbakova and B to Kostornaya. What a crime! But overall very interesting.